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I’m still amazed something thinner than a pack of playing cards can capture such an image of a New York vendor on a cold winter’s night. Steve Jobs may have been a jerk, but was a visionary jerk. | NewYorkCityNotebook, Off Times Square. | jan4.2020 | the storyisthething.com

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By DOUGLAS JOHN IMBROGNO | thestoryisthething.com | feb2020

I am standing on Times Square. Just arrived from out of the ground, like some gopher. Probably like most everyone else who is not a jaded New Yorker, my sense organs are in a state of stasis. Of overwhelm. Of a weird mixture of delight and alarm. My first thought at experiencing the synesthesia of Times Square for the first time in nearly a decade is not: ‘Wow!’ Or: “That actor’s electronic face is really large!”

It is: “Man, I wonder what the carbon footprint of all this is?!”

I should note that I edit a climate change newsletter. (Subscribe for free!)  Such a reaction is normal for me. Although I would argue it should come with the territory that all of us occupy in crazy climate times.


synesthesia
[ sin-uh s-thee-zhuh]

  • Synesthesia is a neurological condition in which information meant to stimulate one of your senses stimulates several of your senses. The word “synesthesia” comes from the Greek words: “synth” (which means “together”) and “ethesia” (which means “perception”).

I am headed to brunch later that morning on Broadway, and one brunchmate is a friend who builds micro-grids to power hospitals, campuses, and businesses. It’s an off-the-grid response to the surprisingly fragile nature of the fossil-fueled world upon which we utterly, and ever more foolishly depend.

But I digress. And I will pontificate more if I don’t bring my attention back to the gigawatt grandiosity of Times Square.

My bearded traveling companion, Michael (foreground), takes in the city so fine they named it twice and which never sleeps. And all that. | NewYorkCItyNotebook, Times Square | jan4.2020 | the storyisthething.com

Grace Notes

My Part Two photos from this trip (Part One: Black-and-White Manhattan) feature the usual New York Tourist Aesthete’s ogling of Times Square and buildings ten times the height we rubes are used to back home in Hobbiton. Yet, courtesy of my traveling companion, Michael, I had the benefit of lodging not in a central tourist district, but at the end of a subway line that dead ends in the heart of an Asian neighborhood in Queens.

Not ever having spent much time in the boroughs, it was bracing to come up out of the ground into a fully functioning neighborhood, one not geared to tourists, but to channeling the street life of an Asian marketplace.

I don’t have much to say about it, having spent only 48 hours there. We crashed right off the main drag, in a too-hot apartment the size of my living room, 600 miles west in Appalachian hill country. (Rube Reaction No. 1: Really? We can’t control how hot the heat is?)

I will observe a couple minor grace notes, though.

How dear it is to see a young Asian man walking with a stooped, grey-haired father or maybe grandfather. The young man’s two arms are looped and locked, hand-to-hand, like a rosette, around the older man’s left arm. They steer together as a defensive unit or urban pas de deux, coming our way down a crammed sidewalk.

Being a vegetarian, I am impressed, but not tempted, by the squishy, spiky, smelly, unfamiliar fish and meats. A splendid panoply of fungi, fruit and meal fixings in stalls and boxes spills out onto the sidewalk at what seems like every 50 feet.

I will concede it: I have never grown cozy with the pungent, too-fishy smells of some Asian marts, which account for why this neighborhood—being a mishmash of fresh-food storefronts—is fishy for blocks.

My tastebuds do swoon at a local restaurant suggested by our flat hostess, who is out of town, clearing space for our come-to-Broadway weekend. I would love the place for its name alone: Dumpling Galaxy. (If, dear friends, you see a song or poem with that title on my timeline later this year, now you know why). The veggie dumplings I order are to die-for. They redefine the entire oeuvre of dumpling history and are, flat out, the best dumplings I’ve tasted in the Milky Way.

So far, at least.

Looking for Change. | NewYorkCityNotebook, Queens |jan4.2020 | thestoryisthething.com

Deeper Waters

But dipping my toes—and nose, and ears, and eyes, and tongue—into New York City after seven years away, mostly in an Appalachian suburb, is not just a smorgasbord of flavors and feels for this 60-something tourist.

In NewYorkNotebook 1, I made a head feint to my complex history with the city. Now, I should warn you. I may be just padding out these words, just to have enough paragraphs to string together my favorite snapshots into photo-essay form. I could, after all, just line them up down the page—onetwothreefourfive just like that—with soothing white space in-between.

I could be done by now. And you, too.

I am enough of a ham, though, and maybe a tease, to think I have more to say than just what’s in these pixellated portraits. My more serious Muses (and a certain friend who says she longs to hear the tale, but is a faithless writer herself), would like me to drive this boat away from shore. Into the deeper, darker waters of What New York Means To Me.

I’m not sure I’m ready for that. But I admit, I am overdue by several decades for completing the unfinished—plus the never-begun—chapters of what I once dubbed the story of “What Happened.” (I most of all owe it to my kids, who as adults now, will hear the full tale first.)

Where We Are Going. | NewYorkCityNotebook, Manhattan | jan4.2020 | thestoryisthething.com

I once began “What Happened” on an ancient blog called Hundred Mountain. The blog’s name—back in the antediluvian, pre-Zuckerberg age, when people did things like keep writerly blogs—was inspired by a genuinely deep observation. There are so many false pretenders to ‘deep observations‘ clogging the Internet. This is an actual one. I can’t this second recall or track down the name of the fellow who coined the phrase. I don’t forget his wise words, though, which for years christened my blog:

There may be more to learn by climbing the same mountain a hundred times, than by climbing a hundred different mountains.”

I will leave you to chew over the phrase, if you’re the kind of person who, like me, is a ruminant of pithy phrases. (Which is not to call you a cow, or to suggest your breath smells like moist grass beginning to decompose.) But to feed you a bit more cud—the phrase recalls for this ruminant the mythologist Joseph Campbell’s narrative of our two possible archetypal lives: the Life of the Hero and the Life of the Village.

Both are worthy lives. As for me, raised on “Star Trek” and Byron; teenage reader of Gabriel Garcia Marquez and Asimov’s “Foundation” series; serial gobbler of anything “Lord of the Rings” and any-and-all mythological lore—I had my ticket punched early for the Life of the Hero.

I was going to climb a hundred different mountains. I had to.

Decades of therapy later and having climbed up and down the same mountain to work for thirty years—and after “What Happened” happened, and then happened again, and then again—I am here to report back to you.

The Life of the Village is not half-bad. Especially when you’re still alive from hapless, failed attempts to live the Life of the Hero.

But, whoa, Nelly! While I’m willing to at least point this boat to deeper water on this last day of January 2020, as I type these words on a dented Macbook Pro as midnight nears, I’m not quite ready to fire up the engines and open up the throttle.

I also really want to lose this shitty boat metaphor.

You Can Find Things and Do Things in the Dark You Can’t Find or Do in the Day. | NewYorkCityNotebook, Queens | jan4. 2020 | thestoryisthething.com

‘The Soapberry Family’

So, let us briefly consider the lychee fruit.

Wikipedia informs me the lychee is the sole member of the genus Litchi in the soapberry family, Sapindaceae. It’s a tropical tree native to the Guangdong and Fujian provinces of southeastern China, where it has been cultivated since at least the 11th century.

I became a fan of fresh lychee while once helping build a Vietnamese Buddhist temple in a suburb south of Paris. (I assure you that we are still in a photo-essay on New York, in a remote province of the Web, in an unfashionable writerly blog, post-Zuckerberg.)

The lychee fruit—this fact I did not know—”is pink-red, roughly textured and inedible, covering sweet flesh.” And—this fact I did know—”it is eaten in many different dessert dishes.

The reason I know this is that the dear Vietnamese ladies who cooked the feasts after Sunday services at Le Pagodhe Tinh Tam in Sevres, the last Metro stop south out of Paris (if I recall correctly), would bring us construction workers leftovers of their feast after cleaning up.

This would have been the winter of 1986-87. At the time, the pagoda was a concrete shell of its current self. Back then, it had only a drafty, unfinished central meditation room and basement dining room suitable for visitors and services.

Late Sunday afternoon, there’d be a knock at the door of our ratty construction trailer on the torn-up, future temple grounds. (Literally, a mousey trailer, as in mice-occupied). I’d swing the door wide and there the women would be, smiling broadly, leftovers in hand. My French was just good enough to greet them, thank them, and take their ramekins of noodles, eggs, vegetables and desserts.

These included sweet, translucent, luscious orbs of lychee flesh. They’re like wet Jolly Rancher candy, I tell you. But soft, sweet and succulent.

The two Portuguese carpenters with whom an Arabic friend and I shared the trailer turned up their noses at these kind offerings. Domingo and Fernando preferred the meat and potatoes they’d whip up on the messy, gas stove, whose white stovetop on many a morning that freezing winter would be peppered with tiny logs of mice poop.

I knew Domingo and Fernando’s likes and dislikes by inference, hand gestures and halting conversations in French-ish, our screwy brew of baby French and Spanish.

I should add that they were master charpentiers, building out of wood frames, concrete, hammers, saws, and nails the glorious temple that exists as we speak today, on a hillside up a side street in Sevres. My Moroccan friend and I were construction bumblers. We’d mix and haul concrete, cut lumber, hammer bent nails straight and try to stay warm around a battered metal barrel of burning scrap wood. We barely earned our keep of a handful of francs, doled out on Sundays by Le Venerable, abbot of the temple Tinh Tam-to-be.

But that’s a longer story—the one my faithless writer friend has pleaded with me for years to get told, already.

You Looking At Me, Right? | NewYorkCityNotebook, Times Square | jan4.2020 | thestoryisthething.com

Until I get around to telling it (subscribe to this blog or I shoot the story), I’ll leave you with this French Wikipedia page devoted to Le Pagode Tinh Tam. It is from this page, just pulled up right now for the first time ever, I learn—also for the first time ever—that “Tinh Tam” signifies in Vietnamese “cœur tranquille.”

Tranquil Heart.

Mine was anything but that winter. Although I might have thought it was, especially given all the hashish I smoked during my workdays and play nights in Paris. It says something about my untranqil cœur at the time that I did not know—or was not tuned in well enough to know—the meaning of the name of the Buddhist temple where I worked for several months.

In between, that is, flitting into the heart of Paris via Metro, in search of more zatla (hashish) in an Arab neighborhood near Sacre Couer, while at the same time seeking the keys to the door to my future as a Byronic hero and globe-galloping writer, known and beloved world round.

Yes, that guy.

But it warms my heart, writing these words during a too-mild January winter in the Appalachian heartland (probably from climate change), that there’s a finished Buddhist temple called ‘Tranquil Heart,’ a long Metro ride south of Paris.

See that swayback roof on Le Pagodhe Tinh Tam in the photo on its French Wikpedia page? I helped build that roof in a tiny, but still real way. Tying off the rebar frame for the concrete pour to come. Hauling concrete to the roof via a perilous rope-and-bucket system crafted by Domingo and Fernando (whom my Arabic friend could’t tell apart and would refer to as ‘Flamingo.’). Trying not to fall to my doom, lying at a 45-degree angle, pliers in hand, pausing to gaze up into the blue skies of France.

Yes, I do recall what I’m doing here. At least, right now.

New York City. Lychee fruit.

So, Michael and I stop into an Asian food mart in Queens. We are returning late from Broadway, after seeing David Byrne’s “American Utopia,” which has been like attending a really, really great musical church service. I need a sweet treat to celebrate this life treat. I see a shiny pink bag of fruit chewies on a shelf of the mart.

Flavor? Lychee fruit.

I’m in. All in.


Up, Up and Away

Look This Way. | NewYorkCityNotebook, I forget where, but the Javits Center was nearby. | jan4.2020 | thestoryisthething.com

Speaking of looking up, let’s point this photo-essay upward. What self-respecting New York tourist picture show would be complete without some rubbernecking? Having spent a very little time in both Paris and New York, I will admit I prefer Paris, and not just because of its more than 2,000-year-old artful history.

It’s also because it’s lower to the ground. If my facts are still correct, the Parisiene suburb of La Defense is the only place where New York-style skycrapers are allowed in the vicinity. (Help me out here, more worldly people than I am these days.)

So, Paris, seen from a high perch like the veranda of Sacre Couer, feels more organic, more human-scale. That’s why the 164-feet-high Arc de Triomphe, commissioned by Napoleon way back in 1806, still commands the eye on the Champs-Elysees, either up close or seen from Sacre Couer. It’s not over-awed by towering buildings.

New York is all thrust and bombast, on the other hand. Pleasurably so, I will add. The most dramatic of its skyscrapers (like the one above) recall enormous rocket ships, ascending in a fiery blast toward outer space. Some familiar lines from the poem “High Flight” by John Gillespie Magee Jr., come to mind. (The final line, at least, while Google supplies the rest of the excerpt):

… Up, up the long, delirious, burning blue
I’ve topped the wind-swept heights with easy grace
Where never lark or even eagle flew —
And, while with silent lifting mind I’ve trod
The high untrespassed sanctity of space,
Put out my hand, and touched the face of God.

New York-scale skyscrapers do point one’s attention heavenward. I’m not so sure about God-ward. But since we took a lychee fruit digression, let’s digress God-ward, as I drop some heaven-pointing skycraper porn from the Manhattan skyscape along the way.


God, What’s That?

Jersey Boys and St. James. | NewYorkCityNotebook, Manhattan. | jan4.2020 | thestoryisthething.com

I’ve never been a very godly guy, in the conventional use of the term. In long seated meditations, the oldest of human questions do arise: ‘God?’ And: ‘What does ‘God’ even signify?!’ And: ‘What the heck is going on here and why I am alive—and what is ‘alive’?!’

Plus, I did write an entire song that interrogates God, and the idea of God, from a Buddhist-y vantage point. So, I’m not entirely a heathen. The song is titled, of all things, “Godless Appalachian Haiku,” or “GAH” as my bandmate at the time of its creation, Rebecca Skeen-Webb, dubbed it. She’d wonder aloud: “Is ‘GAH’ on the set-list this weekend?”

It was one of her favorites of my tunes (“Lights” was one of my faves of hers.) ‘GAH’ was—and is—a favorite of mine, too. It is one of a handful of things I’ve done which, on my deathbed, I’ll happily say, ‘I did that…‘(PS: Hear it on Spotify, with deep thanks to Maynard Chapman for the killer simulated-organ grinder motif, which ties it all together.)

So, ‘Godless Appalachian Haiku….‘ What is up with that?

As a Buddhist sympathizer of long-standing, I’ve spent almost a half-century futzing, getting lost, and found, and lost again, in the deep weeds of Buddhist teachings and practice. I feel I am just now—approaching 63 years of life in this incarnation—getting to the right questions. Much less, by God, the answers, so to speak.

So, while New York’s skyscrapers had me looking up, they didn’t have me looking heavenward. Buddhism, after all, is well known for not centering its teachings on an all-powerful deity, with a beard worthy of a hip, singer-songwriter, up there high above the buildings soaring toward the clouds.

That’s not to say there are no gods in the colorful cosmology of early and later Buddhist teachings. But while the Buddha is considered “a teacher of both gods and men,” he is is no deity himself. He is no Himself or Him—with a capital ‘H.’ (Although, you’d hardly know that from the way some later traditions and devotional, traditional Buddhist cultures reify him with God-like authority, and refer to him as ‘Lord Buddha.’)

Skyscraper Sunburst. | NewYorkCityNotebook, Manhattan | jan4.2020 | thestoryisthethting.com

At this point, I am going to begin to amble slowly backward from the spiritual studies podium, where I do not belong. And begin to get back to portraits of skyscrapers. Here is one above! Yet could that glow, mid-skyscraper, be a reflection of the glory of this something we call ‘God‘? Or is it just a scientifically explicable sunburst on a giant block of glass? Or perhaps those are—and this is one of ‘GAH’s’ suggestions—the same thing?

Lo and behold.

But before I stand down from that lectern where I do not belong, I wish to share a Buddhist story that speaks to this whole God question—and how human effort fits into the Buddhist scheme of things. At least, as far as this Buddhist-sympathizing bumbler interprets it. (And a ‘Caveat lector!’ to you.)

It’s a teaching story about about climbing like a skyscraper into the heavens, searching for answers from on high. The esteemed Western Buddhist monk, Thanissaro Bhikkhu, recounted the story in an interview, noting that the tale is meant “to develop a sense of detachment toward things that people all too often dream about and fall for.”

Like religion. Like some grifter’s facade for God. Or god. Or the gods.

Whatever.

It’s also kind of funny. The story is one of several amusing tales from a spiritual tradition that does not deserve its sometimes caricature of being a grim slog through an endless bog of suffering. (Not that life, unskillfully lived, cannot turn into a grim slog through a seemingly endless stinky bog.)

So, there’s this determined monk who achieves a vision of some devas. Unseen to most us muddle-headed humans (but not the Buddha, whom they often chat up), devas are sort of angelic, spiritually advanced beings who, however, have their own issues and challenges. The monk asks some devas he meets: “Do you know where the physical universe ends?

Thanissaro Bhikkhu picks up the tale from there:

“They say they don’t know, but that there’s a higher level of devas. Maybe they know. So the monk gets a vision of the higher level of devas and asks them the same question. They don’t know, but they send him to the next level up. This process repeats, as he gets sent up, up, up, the deva bureaucracy until he finally comes face-to-face with the Great Brahma. He asks the question, and the Great Brahma responds, “I am the Great Brahma, All-knowing, All-seeing, the father of all that has been and will be.”

If at this point you are getting an “I am the Great and Powerful OZ!” vibe, you’d be on the right track.

The monk, just like the Tin Man, isn’t cowed. He says, “I didn’t ask you if you were the Great Brahma, and so on, I asked you if you know where the physical universe ends.” The Great Brahma repeats that he’s the Great Brahma, and the monk persists with his question three times (which in many spiritual tales requires an answer on the third try.)

The Great Brahma takes the monk by the arm, and pulls him aside. If this were a sit-com, the great god would pull the quizzical monk into a broom closet or something, out of sight of his god-drunk followers. And whisper the following:

“Look. I don’t know! But my retinue thinks I know everything, and I don’t want to disappoint them. You go back and ask the Buddha.'”

And since the Buddha was a human being, like the rest of us bumblers, who attained the complete enlightenment and liberation from suffering of which all us humans are capable—however bumbly we may be right now—that’s where the answer lies.

In our human self. In our human striving. Amid a circle of serious, disciplined seekers. Not up there in the clouds, in a penthouse loft atop thrusting skyscrapers. (That’s my last bit, not Thannisaro Bhikku’s.)

The reputed last words of the Buddha, on his death bed as an 80-something guy with a bad back, are instructive. His followers wondered who was going to take over the enlightenment business? Should there be a successor? Maybe something like a Buddhist Pope?

Nope.

Said the Buddha: “Work out your own salvation with diligence.”

PS: Somehow, this last skyscraper snapshot (below), feels pertinent as I close down this digression, which likely shed much of the readership of this photo-essay ramble, down to this handful of us. (Still with me? Thanks for sticking it out! We’ll be wrapping up shortly!!)

I don’t know what this New York building is, but it looks like a church or a once-church. I love how squat and solid it sits against the silvery glory of skyscrapers on their launching pads. The spires of this building also reach for the sky, but at a much more human scale.

We keep reaching—and building—toward the sky.

But maybe the answer is closer to the ground?

Very Old, Very New. | NewYorkCityNotebook, Manhattan | jan4.2020 | thestoryisthething.com

Streets and Alleys

New York is also a city of streets and alleys. I cannot imagine the difference in perspective between the fellow with the umbrella (below), striding through an alley in Queens—and the Queen of Trump Tower in New York, for instance.

Not to get all political, but I just read somewhere that Melania Trump occupies a whole floor in Trump Tower. It is her personal space. Probably her refuge from the man-baby now in charge of the fate of the Americas, if not the Western world, if not the world.

Venus and Mars. No, Venus and Pluto. That is how far apart the man with the umbrella in Queens is from the lived experience of the Queen of Trump Tower and her deeply damaged, dangerous husband.

Rain Check. | NewYorkCityNotebook, Queens. | jan4.2020 | thestoryisthething.com

I will admit several things as we wrap up. I have spent a week composing and tweeking this photo-essay. That is partly because in my post-newspaper life—laid off April 2018 after more than 30 years as a feature writer/editor—I am rather delightedly discovering something.

I never went into newspapering to be a journalist. That is likely how everyone who still remembers my service with a great small American newspaper called The Charleston Gazette, may recall me, if they recall my work at all. And it was like joining a proud branch of the service, working for a feisty newspaper that kicked butts and took names. (COMING ATTRACTIONS to TheStoryIsTheThing: DON MARSH: A Short Memoir of a Great Lou Grant-Editor in the Appalachian Hills.)

I saw my job as offering some soothing, readerly, inspirational balm to our readership. You likely needed it after you’d come away enraged, disgusted or depressed by some new expose or investigation of how royally the Good Ol’ Boys had screwed the political pooch a-GAIN!). While my hard news colleagues set out to steer West Virginia in a more just, equitable and fair direction, I felt my charge was to paint portraits of worthy, soulful people and cool cultural events that made life worth living in West Virginia.

(By the way, that’s West ‘By God’ Virginia, to you out-of-towners. Speaking of God. Or god. Or the gods.)

But wait—here’s the realization. I went into newspapering as it was the only job, to the east, west, north and south, that would pay a living wage—plus insurance and dental—to write. I wanted to be an essayist, a la Tom Wolfe or Harry Crews or Oriana Fallaci. (I’m naming some early essay mentors-from-afar.) So blame Tom or Harry or Oriana for why I am still notorious at the Gazette—in a poke-in-the-ribs sort of way—for writing the longest feature story ever written there. On pawpaws. (That’s because pawpaws and their history are really cool.)

I’ve also spent this past week hiding out from the Republican Senatorial dunce class in Washington, D.C., giving the finger to the Founding Fathers. Plus, avoiding watching them leaping up from their fat-bottomed fatuousness to give He Who Shall Not Be Named successive standing ovations at the SOTU.

Don’t get me started.

Thanks for visiting New York City with me. If you’re not subscribed to the blog, consider doing so, to get notice of the third and final installment in this photo-essay series, titled: NewYork/Notebook: Faces in Places. And a fourth separate piece, tentatively titled: “Why David Byrne’s ‘American Utopia’ is So Much Better than The Final ‘Star Wars’ Movie.“)

I’ll also reveal the results of my attempt to, at long last, meet Father Byrne.

PS: If you lasted this long, and came here via my Facebook timeline that teased this photo-essay, please go there and type the single word ‘Finito‘! (Italian for ‘Finished!’) as a comment, to be entered into a drawing with fabulous prizes.

No, seriously. Well, the prizes, at least. Whether they’re fabulous or not is up to you. If you got to this essay by a different route, type ‘Finito!‘ in a comment to this essay below

But it may take awhile to track down one of the prizes.

You just can’t find lychee-flavored fruit chewies anywhere.

Say Hi to the Sky. | NewYorkCityNotebook, Manhattan | jan4.2020 | thestoryisthething.com

Finito!


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10 Comments

  • Richard D. Erlich

    A beautiful essay in the old tradition: an “essay”/”assay,” an attempt, an exploration — a meditation.

    And views and images from an orbit not only jagged — which is necessary to see close-up and from a distance — but quantum (from a distance and close-up simultaneously).

    (Cool!)

    • Douglas Imbrogno

      Thank you, Rich. I count you as one of the writing mentors in my life. So, your always insightful and ‘lateral thinking observations about writing and life are most welcome, appreciated and treasured.

  • Connie Kinsey

    Finito!

    Oh dear Douglas! Now granted, I am hopped up on pain meds, caffeine and Chili Cheese Fritos after foot surgery, but this was just splendid!

    I, too, have an affinity for the lychee and somewhere in Guatemala are several cement block homes that I bent rebar for. And remind me to tell you the story of taking a rural Appalachian boy, aka my son, to New York.

    Which is to say that your storytelling provokes me to tell stories and, well, the story is the thing! I must now blow the dust off my blog and write.

    Well done, maestro!

    • Douglas Imbrogno

      From one writer (and essayist) to another, thank you, Connie I look forward to your undusted blog! But I will also take your post-dessert readings of your lovely, powerful prose on the deck as the sun’s going down.

  • Pam Ross

    First, I must tell you that I really like the gopher analogy in your opening sentence. Douglas, as gopher, emerging from underground into the big city is a very funny image that is a solid opener. I had only a few minutes to scroll though your piece before running off to a class (“pilates for boomers” I’m afraid to say), but I’m looking forward to delving into the story. While scrolling I also noticed several stunning photos, which brought me back to my time there. Although the city has evolved, its underlying essence is still apparent. Pam

  • Lucas

    Wonderful writing and backstory you’ve shared here Dad, I am always struck by your ability to create moving imagery and cross terrain from the present, past & future and tie it all together into a relatable tale. As your son there may be nothing more cool than reading such precisely told tales from before I even originated, and how it all ties into present experiences. I greatly enjoy being be able to glimpse your perspective through these writings, keep it up dad 🙂

    Love,
    Lucas

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